NEW YOUTUBE VIDEO: 17 THINGS I LEARNED AT 17 (except its actually 8)
Hey guys!! I just dropped a new YouTube video talking about a couple of things I've learned throughout the years! I did a lot of reflection and talked about what was most meaningful and beneficial to me (and I think they'd apply to most people)! This obviously fits into the more mental health aspect of the project, as I talk about failure, perceptions, value, and soooo much more! I do a really good job at talking for long periods of time, and this video really shows that haha. But anyways I really hope this is beneficial to some people. Personally, I would've really wanted to watch something like this months and even years back!NEW YOUTUBE VIDEO: 5 MOST COMMON ESSAY MISTAKES
Hey everyone!! Instead of a blog post this month, I decided to create a YouTube video where I talk about the most common mistakes I see in college essays. After reviewing so many essays, I tend to see a pattern where students fall short. In the video below, I go in depth about the 5 most common mistakes most people make: Weak Openings, Weak Conclusions, Repetition, Telling instead of showing, and a lack of reflection. Please Please Please comment what else I should make videos on! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ - It's just amazing !! Gabe is such a wholesome person who gave advice on my extracurriculars and things to work on. I couldn't be more satisfied !! I highly recommend him, Gabe is excellent !!⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ - This was some excellent feedback. Not only were you able to highlight the strengths of my essay, you gave some good genuine feedback that could be incorporated into my essay which can make it stronger.⭐⭐⭐⭐ - i really appreciate the resource of getting help and feedback not being put behind a paywall that i can’t afford. feedback was really thorough and i definitely will send more drafts!! thank u so much and i appreciate your tips 🙏⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ - My experience was great because I got detailed feedback. I got my results back really quickly!!!⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ - had asked for help after being unclear on my essay draft and I was immediately approached within a reasonable time! I didn’t have to wait months and months for someone to respond which I truly appreciated and there was clear communication between the reviewer and myself which definitely eased my mind with who was reviewing my essay draft. The suggestions itself were also very clear and helpful and everything that I was questioning or struggling with before was given a solution or tip which I appreciated.⭐⭐⭐⭐ - I love how you included both the parts you thought were strong and the ones you thought i could work a little more on! You really made it clear the parts I need to focus on and seeing how my message translated to another reader was very helpful. The only reason I gave a 4 is because I think for the suggestions you are giving on what to fix in the essay you could go into just a little more detail about how exactly to do that instead of just saying make it more inspiring but I get how that can be hard considering it’s my story and I know it best:) Again this was so helpful and I really appreciate you looking over it!